A Tale in the Trees

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Fractured foundations, disorderly vines

     they dismissed the new, tender leaf;

gentle, fragile, needing nourishment-

     the tiny sprout silently grieved.

Indolent, ignorance normal

     the trunk provided no cover;

her family branches protruded-

     barren, dark from the others.

Perplexed by the neighbors who care for their own

     they help, support and uplift;

their tenders surrounded by healthy branches-

     not one is left adrift.

But in her tree…

The roots were shallow, refusing to dig deep

     carving their sharp edges disguise;

complaining all others had easier-

     but that was merely a lie.

Full, healthy branches didn’t receive more rain

     nor brighter sun;

they forged steady through storms-

     protecting their young.

No guides or older wise

     the seedling kept striving;

decided effort producing fruit-

     the leaf ultimately thriving.

Distance from brokenness

     took some time;

persistent, tenacious

     the higher she climbed.

Vibrantly rising, eyes on the Son

     she seeded her own new tree;

devoted through decades, never a waver-

     her little sprouts danced free.

A Tale in the Trees was not originally written as a formal poem. But, after several educational comments from attentive and helpful readers, I’m updating this section of the post to list it as a free verse poem! I’m dabbling in poetry, and these words came to me while walking through the park. The groundskeepers were doing some tree work, leaving several remnants that sparked these thoughts.

Wishing you a wonderful, first full-week of August ahead!

Poem published at Spillwords: Rollerblading Behind a Triplet Stroller

24 responses to “A Tale in the Trees”

  1. balladeer Avatar

    Terrific post!

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    1. Mid-Life Mama Avatar

      Thank you – I sincerely appreciate your comment!

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  2. murisopsis Avatar

    Mama duck – I disagree! This IS a poem and it is Free Verse. Free verse is just that – free to wander in time and tense, free from the requirement to rhyme but not completely prohibited either! I love this tale of the tenacious seedling!! Bravo poet!!

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    1. Mid-Life Mama Avatar

      Thank you for the definition…that offers freedom to try without providing another “not-poetry” disclaimer😅! I assumed tense and rhyme must at least be consistent to qualify as free verse. You are one of many poets I read regularly, so I’m very grateful for your comment🤍🤍.

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      1. murisopsis Avatar

        Free verse seldom has rhyme and if it is there it can be near rhyme and can occur internally – that is not at the end of a line! As for tense – nope you are free to mix it up!! That’s what is meant by free verse – you are free to write whatever and however you please!!!!

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        1. Mid-Life Mama Avatar

          You have sparked my interest! Big thank you again!

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          1. murisopsis Avatar

            Be fearless and write free verse!

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  3. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    I am rooting for that sprout!

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    1. Mid-Life Mama Avatar

      Thank you, Jacqui!🌱🌱🌱

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    2. The Mindful Migraine Blog Avatar

      That’s exactly what I was thinking too; go sprout! Lovely post, Linda xx

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      1. Mid-Life Mama Avatar

        I’m rooting for the sprout too!🌱 That makes three of us! Thank you, Linda

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        1. The Mindful Migraine Blog Avatar

          🥰

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  4. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
    Willie Torres Jr.

    What a touching and inspiring piece. And WoW, such beautiful photos too, truly a work of heart and hope.

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    1. Mid-Life Mama Avatar

      Thank you for your kind comment, Willie! I’m happy you enjoyed the photos along with the words.

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      1. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
        Willie Torres Jr.

        Always my pleasure

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  5. Michele Lee Avatar

    Gorgeous post! Thank you and a lovely day to you. 💚

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    1. Mid-Life Mama Avatar

      Thank you, Michele💕

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      1. Michele Lee Avatar

        A pleasure! 💕

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  6. JanBeek Avatar

    Ah, “the “tale” that came to [you] yesterday walking through the park” is delightful! Love the brilliant greens!

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    1. Mid-Life Mama Avatar

      Thank you, kindly! I’m happy you enjoyed the tale.

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  7. lghiggins Avatar

    Don’t discount this work. Just because you have never worked a lot with poetry doesn’t mean you are not capable. I think it is beautiful, especially juxtaposed with the photographs.

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    1. Mid-Life Mama Avatar

      Thank you so very much for your thoughtful words. There are many writers on WP who follow complex poetry formats but afterward, I learned that free verse covers just about anything!
      Your comments mean very much – thank you again, Linda🩷.

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  8. Amy Avatar

    Such a special post! Beautiful captures.

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    1. Mid-Life Mama Avatar

      I’m happy you enjoyed the post and the photos…have a wonderful evening.

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